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Passion is not a right
It's a privledge

Love isn't guaranteed
Just offered

If anyone you know
Would tell you what they feel
When they saw your beautiful eyes
That mesmerize
What would you feel?

What would you feel?

Even if I only glimpse you
Out of the corner of my eye
For a second or two
Every day
I will still love you

I would still love you

I would lie to you
Because I love you
And hold you in my arms
Even if it's not our destiny to be together
It won't stop me from loving you

It won't stop me from loving you

And what about
The hypocrites
The liars and thieves and misers
Who tell you love isn't real?
Would you believe them?

Would you believe them?

And if you love me
If you love me
If you love me...

If you love me...

Then just say so

How can I tell you
How I feel
If you don't know who you are?

How can I tell you
That I love you
If I don't know who I am?
©2008-2009 ~Agrifex
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To she who I love
Even if you don't know who you are

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:iconicequeenofwinter:
wow... I'm reveling in the awesome-ness of this poem/song/whatever... This is so powerful and so beautiful in a way that I can't describe...

This is very very good. Well-done. Well, I'd say she'd be flattered if/when she reads it...

Brava!! :clap: :heart:
:iconchaseroo:
omg this is amazing! :+favlove: for sure, anyway i can totally relate dude.

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:iconloveondeathswings:
Awe, this is so sweet :)

I really like how you managed to capture the whole uncertainty of teen infatuation in this piece.

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rite now i could give u a bigillion hugs
that was beautifulll
this girl should be soo happy you love her :)
:iconkillerkelly:
This is beautiful! Stunning work! :+fav: :clap: Your an amazing poet!!!! :hug:

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:iconrenofdarkness:
:clap: bloody brilliant! this is just how i feel about a boy at school...

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:iconbowiesinspace:
nyawwwwww thats so sweet n___n
:icon3talefox814:
I cried reading this ... I loved it that much ... Your really talented you know ...

I think I can relate to this because I was once in a similar situation

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:iconbeautiful-vampire:
awww! this is super sweet!!!:heart: I like this poem!!^^ Your really good with poems and drawing! Your really skilled and talented!^^Oh and hey! Guess what! I got the Bikou drawing done for you! I had to figure out her hair styler before I drew her! and well that took awhile! So I'm going to scan her right now! and post her! ^^

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...thanx!
And thanx again!

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